The feedback I received is very mixed, one underlying comment that came from the feedback was that the shots are too long and need more variety in the video. The editing appears to be very basic and so its very easy to see where the cuts have been made, some also say that the lip syncing is also out of sync. This makes me rethink the video, it shows that I still need to do a lot of work. One thing that received a lot of positive feedback was the quality of shots, some people also think that there should be more shots of Jaya laying on the floor.
What went well:
Good editing at the beginning
Variety of distant shots
Effects used
Lying down shots
Performance shots in drama studio
Silhouette Shots
Shot transitions
Mise en scene
Variety of shots
Jaya plays part well
Even better if:
Lip Syncing was in time
Shorter length of shots
Wall shots are too dark
Editing can do with improvement
Black and white as well as colour doesn't show the theme.
Some shots do not fit the genre
Laying on the floor shot seems out of play
Lighting is a bit of an issue in the drama studio
Add something else
Performance gets boring
Faster cuts
On average I scored 29.9 out of 40. In conclusion the things that went well are the quality of shots, the mise en scene and the variety of shots, the things that could be improved upon are the lengths of the shots, espcailly the wall shots and have either black and white or colour having both doesn't give a clear theme. By using this feedback I am going to try and get something else into the video for example we have a lot of good dancers in the school so I may incorporate someone to dance to the song and use these clips in my video to add something more than just performance.
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