Love the page with
the 'J' on it, very professional, the front cover photo shot is excellent, the
page with lots of photos looks a bit too all over the place, perhaps if you
want it in that style find a way to present it in a much neater way.
The pictures are very
professional and it is very believable that Jaya is a real singer.
I think that the images
are of a good quality but I don’t like the "J" design it is very
unclear and hard to see. The thank you page could also be changed a little
because it’s not very good to look at.
Very pop girl like,
needs a CD.
WWW: Very good Front
cover and song list looks highly professional. EBI: Song list background
picture was in b/w. Personally not a fan of the photos layered on top of each
other personally I think picking 9 and fitting them all in so you can see would
look better. Not sure what the J on one whole page is? Change the title text on
the thank you page or at least remove the underline. Just keep with the b/w
really looks good and professional I would recommend using the same font on all
pages (apart from front cover) and keep continuity and it will be perfect good
luck!
Jaya's photo shoot is
brilliant and the top middle photo looks like something out of a proper album
cover. However there is no colour uniformity.
When looking at the
Jaya digipak it looks professional straight away, all the images that have been
taken are in good quality. The font that have been used work really well with
the rest of the layout and background colours that have been used. Not everything
on the background is black and white and colour is used as well this is what
makes it look professional. You can tell what the genre is when looking at the
digipak.
Strong imagery and
text here! The fact that the boxes don't quite match is really bugging me, and
I'm not really getting the far right column, I don't think they're adding
anything to the digipak.
Lovely, professional
looking pictures, they look great! Like the font used, but could have maybe
been repeated throughout as there are a few.
I think this is a
well thought out digipak that looks nice and is very simple but effective. The
fonts used are very good and easy to read. The digipak has synergy with the
rest of the artist’s products which is very good.
I like this digipack
because it uses multiple images of the star and shows clearly who it is. I also
like the themes
Could add in a lyrics
page rather than one of the pages with pictures.
Can see the pictures
are taken in school I like some of the pictures
Not sure what the 'J'
is for Photos look professional Photo montage in the bottom right looks like it
was made quickly
AWESOME variety all
round some typography could be a bit more exciting, particularly on the cover
The fonts don't seem
to link together, which they could to make the digipak even better. I love the
section which is just black and white stripes with the 'J'. There are 4 black
and white sections and two coloured sections which i feel could all be the same
to link together.
Collage image page is
good - pictures all look really professional and appropriate. Improvements: not
sure what the actual theme is here, it’s all a bit mish mash, try and make it
more continuous with your ideas then it will look more effective.
The feedback is very mixed some people like the 'J' art some do not, most feedback was really helpful it showed me that the images look too messy and that the text is inconstant which makes the digipak look amateurish.
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