GRACE STARR
GOOD- The pictures are well placed and with the same style the throughout the website it gives off a professional feel. The background image, in fact all of them, are strong and clear ones which again shows the professionalism of the site. The transitions of the site are consistent and work well. The wide variety of merchandise and quality of it is fantastic, as well as the sign up for newsletters, it shows that real thought has gone into the designing of the site.
EVEN BETTER IF- Information on the 'press' page is all down one side,making the page rather long,possibly put some of the articles on the opposite side, unless they are down one side for the purpose of the image being visible. There could be less images on the 'about Grace' as they are already on the 'media' page. The Iphone on the merchandise page could you possibly remove the small lines around the Iphone?
In conclusion the site itself is fantastic, the quality of images,merchandise and titles are fantastic, the hard work gone into it, is defiantly noticeable.
NICHOLAS ALEXANDER
GOOD-The home pages bold title,shows who this website is based upon,the see-through background is an innovative design for a site, which allows the user to see the text as well as the background so nothing is cut off. The 'contact' page is well thought out and therefore easy to read and use.
EVEN BETTER IF-Some of the images are really pixelated, it may be possible to make it less pixelated by using some type of filter or adjusting the brightness of the image. You can also tell that some of the images are taken in a classroom and the galleries lengthy description may not be necessary. Images of the other bands on the 'tour' page needs to be changed. On the 'about' page maybe you could give more information about 'Nicholas' rather than his career.
In conclusion the website is very good, it shows his personality throughout his site, some things need slight improvements but all in all its a good site.
ENCODED
GOOD- The countdown until the album is a really good idea, its very original and not seen on many sites which makes it so different. The images are good quality,although few of them, they show who the artists are.The links on the site are also well placed,as well as the transition throughout the site.
EVEN BETTER IF- Grammar on the site could be looked at again. To make the social media links more accessible maybe put them at the top of each page or somewhere they are visible.
In conclusion the site is of good quality, if more images are added it can show different sides of the group, however all together it is easy to navigate and read due to the layout and font.
COSMO
GOOD-The homepage is bright and the filter works well with the stars image, they variety of pictures is good and all the images of clear, the design of the gallery is also unique, but it allows you to see the images without having to click on the full picture, which is also a good idea. The merchandise, although simple, is very good, when moving the mouse over the image its description appears with a different colour background which is also a great idea.
EVEN BETTER IF-The text on the 'dates' could be larger and clearer, so it is more visible to the user. On the 'Meet Cosmo' is blank so that needs completely, as well as the 'contact' page. I think that there should be more information on Cosmo himself so the audience know who he is and what he's about.
In conclusion I think that the website is really good, although still under construction once its done it will look professional.
HYBRID BEAUTY
GOOD-There is a strong background image throughout the website, the merchandise has a fantastic range and is really good quality. The 'About Us' images are amazing quality, which defiantly gives the site/page a professional feel to them. The interviews are really good and well laid out.One thing I really love about the site is its consistency, the colours remain the same on each page which shows the thought gone into it. The text is also the same on each page, the consistency throughout shows the professionalism of the site.
EVEN BETTER IF-The purple text of the front of the home screen could be a lot clearer, there could also be a little more information on the home screen. Also the text on the 'Gallery' page could also be more visible,although I understand that the theme is black and white, the text does need to be clearer to read,the same can be said for the text on the 'Shop' page and 'contact' page. Also the tour dates are to one side, maybe you could bring those into the centre? Unless they purpose of them being there is to see the image better then that is understandable. 'About Us' 'Iris' picture is different to the other two, while the others are next to a tree,using it as a prop, 'Iris' is in front of a brick wall, so maybe change the image to match the others? Also on the 'News' page it is just images and interviews maybe have a live link to their social media pages?
In conclusion the site is really well presented as well as the consistency it gives it a real professional feel, with a few minor changes the site can look incredible.
ALLEYWAYS
GOOD- The bold homepage, shows the album cover, which I love as it really sets the tone for the rest of the site.The images in the 'Gallery' are strong ones, they show the different personalities in the band, which really comes across in each image. Especially with the black background they like look incredibly professional shots, something that not all sites have(including my own). The Alleyways merchandise is really well presented/made, it gives a variety of different items that all look professional made. The alleyways site has the same theme throughout which only adds to its quality.
EVEN BETTER IF-There are only a few things that may need improving, possibly add some images to the 'UK Tour' page or move the text into the middle,the only other thing is the text, now I am not sure if this is on purpose but each sentence seems to be missing its capital letter and so is all in lower case.
In conclusion I think that the site is almost flawless and am really impressed with the teams effort on the site.
ALEX ECHO
GOOD-There is a consistent theme throughout the site with a good strong background. The images throughout the site are clear with bold text.
EVEN BETTER IF-The page is really busy and has a lot of different information on, maybe try to make it simpler by putting other bits of information of different pages.One thing that confuses is me is who Sam is? He features is some of the pictures and since the website is for 'Alex Echo' a solo artist, I wonder what relevance Sam has to the artist? Also the merchandise images are extremely blurry, with only two items on there, I think more is needing (assuming under construction)
In conclusion I think that the basis of the site is very good, with minimal improvements it could be even better.
JAMES COULER
GOOD-The Twitter feed on the Home screen is good,it allows the user to see what the artist is up to without having to open a separate tab. The background image is consistent throughout the website as well as the text.The merchandise is done really well, they are flawless and looks like it is created by a manufacturer.
EVEN BETTER IF- All the pages are unnecessarily long, look at Wix to see if you can change that, also the back image is slightly grainy,see if you can use some editing tool to fix it. There are also no tour dates on the site(assuming under construction). Most images are grainy, some of which you can tell are taken in a school classroom, some shots are also really similar with just a slight head change movement, making some images unnecessary.
Also the image does not cover the entire page, leaving some black space on the side which makes the site look less professional and more amateur. The contact information should also be larger with links to his Facebook and Twitter pages. Also there is no information about 'James Couler' which is definitely needed.
In conclusion,if changes are made the site can look even better and more professional.